How do you think of this environmental poem that I wrote?

I think It is very nice, great point you get across well. you need to break it up a bit, leave a space after a period. (but taht isn't a big deal. The only thing I really would change, is "And do deeds that ain't very nice," take out the ain't and replace. the rest of it sounds so lovely, and the aint sounds harsh. It really is a lovely poem though. nature FTW!